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The graph and table illustrate the information about export activities in a country between 2015 and 2106. Those figures tell about incomes from exporting various products, which are provided in billions. Additionally, in the table, given the change in values comparing from 2015 to 2016, the information is presented in percentage. The details of both figures will be clarified in the following paragraphs Apparently, in 2016, the exported amount of petroleum products, engineered goods, agricultural products and textiles always exceeded the amount in 2015. Moreover, there were noticeable amounts of shipping in petroleum products and engineered goods, for the former is 60 billion in 2015 and around 63 billion in 2016, which increased by 3%. The latter was responsible for approximately 58 billion and 62 billion, rising by 8. 5%. Interestingly, gems and jewellery was spotted the downward trend in 2016, decreasing by 5. 18% from 42 billion in 2015 to 41 billion in 2016. Agricultural products was exported with almost the same amount in two years, which was slightly rising by 0. 81%. Textiles were the less in exportation in 2015, however, it could decrease to the same amount with Agricultural products in 2016, it was growing about 15. 24%.

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amount
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products
, engineered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
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products
 and textiles always exceeded the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 in 2015. Moreover
, there were noticeable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amounts
 of shipping in petroleum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 and engineered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
, for the former is 60 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billion
 in 2015 and around 63 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billion
 in 2016, which increased by 3%. The latter was responsible for approximately 58 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billion
 and 62 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billion
, rising by 8. 5%.

Interestingly
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was spotted
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billion
 in 2015 to 41 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billion
 in 2016. Agricultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
was exported
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amount
 in two years, which was slightly
 rising by 0. 81%. Textiles were the less in exportation in 2015, however
, it could decrease to the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
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products
 in 2016, it was growing about 15. 24%. 