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The graph and table illustrate the information about export activities in a country between 2015 and 2106. Those figures tell about incomes from exporting various products, which are provided in billions. Additionally, in the table, given the change in values comparing from 2015 to 2016, the information is presented in percentage. The details of both figures will be clarified in the following paragraphs Apparently, in 2016, the exported amount of petroleum products, engineered goods, agricultural products and textiles always exceeded the amount in 2015. Moreover, there were noticeable amounts of shipping in petroleum products and engineered goods, for the former is 60 billion in 2015 and around 63 billion in 2016, which increased by 3%. The latter was responsible for approximately 58 billion and 62 billion, rising by 8. 5%. Interestingly, gems and jewellery was spotted the downward trend in 2016, decreasing by 5. 18% from 42 billion in 2015 to 41 billion in 2016. Agricultural products was exported with almost the same amount in two years, which was slightly rising by 0. 81%. Textiles were the less in exportation in 2015, however, it could decrease to the same amount with Agricultural products in 2016, it was growing about 15. 24%.
The graph and table illustrate the information about export activities in a country between 2015 and 2106. Those figures
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in
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, in the table,
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change
in values comparing from 2015 to 2016, the information
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details
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amount
of petroleum
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products
, engineered
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goods
, agricultural
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products
and textiles always exceeded the
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amount
in 2015.
Moreover
, there were noticeable
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amounts
of shipping in petroleum
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products
and engineered
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goods
, for the former is 60
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billion
in 2015 and around 63
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billion
in 2016, which increased by 3%. The latter was responsible for approximately 58
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billion
and 62
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billion
, rising by 8. 5%.

Interestingly
, gems and
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jewellery
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the downward trend in 2016, decreasing by 5. 18% from 42
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billion
in 2015 to 41
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billion
in 2016. Agricultural
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products
was exported
with almost the same
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amount
in two years, which was
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however
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with Agricultural
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in 2016, it was growing about 15. 24%.
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