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Summarize the line graph and make comparisons

Summarize the line graph and make comparisons p16a2

The given line graph gives information about the amount of queries received by the Tourist Information Office in a city for six months from January to June in the year 2011. In an overall, the maximum quantity of questions was in person which was in the month of June and the least was by letter or email during the same month. While the total number in person and by phone went up considerably, the information sought through letter or email plunged during the period. It is clear from the graph that the Tourist Information Office received almost 900 enquiries in January through calls which decreased gently to 800 in February and later increased to 1000 in March. It then witnessed a drastic rise and reached 1600 in June. In the same way, doubts raised personally were just above 400 in January which surged and hit the highest level which was approximately 1900

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