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Literacy rate by various regions

Literacy rate by various regions Q57Kb
The bar chart indicate the percentage of males and females who can read and write the various regions in 2011. Consequently, that horizontal axis lists the areas and vertical axis represent the percentage. Overall when we compare it can be seen that all surveyed men and women from Central Asia and central Eastern Europe are literate. On the other hand approximately 60% average of people in sub-saharan Africa could ability read and write. In the same way, the people in Easter Asia /pacific and Latin America Caribbean are literate in those zone. In addition, in the Arab state men read and write more than women about 15%. The most significant various have occurred in south and west Asia which the literacy rate of men in excess approximately 25% relate to women. Finally, the lowest literacy rate are in sub-saharan Africa men read and write ability nearly 70% and women competency 60%.
The bar chart indicate the percentage of males and females who can
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and
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the various regions in 2011.
Consequently
, that horizontal axis lists the areas and vertical axis represent the percentage.
Overall
when we compare it can be
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seen
that all surveyed
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men
and
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women
from Central Asia and central Eastern Europe are literate.
On the other hand
approximately 60% average of
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people
in
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sub-saharan
Africa could ability
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and
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write
.
In the same way
, the
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people
in Easter Asia /pacific and Latin America Caribbean are literate in those zone.
In addition
, in the Arab state
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men
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read
and
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write
more than
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women
about 15%. The most significant various have occurred in south and west Asia which the literacy rate of
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men
in excess approximately 25% relate to
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women
.
Finally
, the lowest literacy rate are in
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sub-saharan
Africa
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men
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ability
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70% and
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women
competency 60%.
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IELTS academic Literacy rate by various regions

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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