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The maps give information about transformation of the waterfront area in Stokeford from 1930 to 2010.

The maps give information about transformation of the waterfront area in Stokeford from 1930 to 2010. 3W0Al
The maps give information about transformation of the waterfront area in Stokeford from 1930 to 2010. As can be seen from the maps, Stockeford underwent a dramatic transformation over the period, becoming noticeably more built up, and there was no more farmland. In 1930, Stokeford was a small town, which completely located in the east of River Stock. There was a path, which bisected town into two disproportionate parts. Apart from farmland, some shops, post offices and house were constructed in the west of the road. Towards the east of the path, there were also settlements and farmland. Besides, primary school and big gardens including large houses and trees were established. In 2010, farmlands were demolished to make way for dwellings. Shops towards the west of main road were pulled down to expand route along with new residences. In the opposite side, it is clear that the pathway also was expanded. In addition, primary school was extended and gardens became smaller. Trees were cut down to replace retirement home. Eventually, River Stock and the bridge remain unchanged.
The maps give information about transformation of the waterfront area in
Stokeford
from 1930 to 2010.

As can be
seen
from the maps,
Stockeford
underwent a dramatic transformation over the period, becoming
noticeably
more built up, and there was no more farmland.

In 1930,
Stokeford
was a
small
town, which completely located in the east of River Stock. There was a path, which bisected town into two disproportionate parts. Apart from farmland,
some
shops, post offices and
house
were constructed
in the west of the road. Towards the east of the path, there were
also
settlements and farmland.
Besides
, primary school and
big
gardens including large
houses
and trees
were established
.

In 2010, farmlands
were demolished
to
make
way for dwellings. Shops towards the west of main road
were pulled
down to expand route along with new residences. In the opposite side, it is
clear
that the pathway
also
was expanded
.
In addition
, primary school
was extended
and gardens became smaller. Trees were
cut
down to replace retirement home.
Eventually
, River Stock and the bridge remain unchanged.
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