Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The table charts compare and contrast data on

The table charts compare and contrast data on m8XD1
The table charts compare and contrast data on the changes of information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five different nations in Europe over a course five years from 1999 to 2004. Overall, the number of sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee witnessed growth in all five countries while there are some downward trends seen in the number of bananas were sold in two countries named Sweden and Denmark. Looking at coffee’s turnover, the sales of Switzerland achieved 3 million euros while in the year 1999, followed by around 1. 8 and 1. 5 million euros in the number of Denmark and UK in that order. The lower numbers were seen in Belgium and Denmark with 1 and 0. 8 million euros at the same year. Moreover, after five years, the sales of UK rose up and become the most nation earned from sales of coffees, with 20 million euros. Also, the other countries just grew about 0. 2 to 3 million euros in the sales of coffee. Regarding banana’s sales, in the year the 1999 sales of UK earned 15 million euros which was highest compared with 2, 1. 8, 1 and 0. 6 of Denmark, Sweden, Switzerland and Belgium respectively. The year 2004 saw upward trends in the banana sales of UK, Switzerland and Belgium of 47, 5. 5, and 4 in that order while the opposite were true in the number of Sweden and Denmark which were decreased by about 1 million euro over the period.
The table charts compare and contrast data on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
of information about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Fairtrade-labelled
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
and bananas in five
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
nations in Europe over a course five years from 1999 to 2004.

Overall
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Fairtrade-labelled
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
witnessed growth in all five countries while there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
downward trends
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of bananas
were sold
in two countries named Sweden and Denmark.

Looking at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee’s
turnover, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of Switzerland achieved 3
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
euros while in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
1999, followed by around 1. 8 and 1. 5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
euros in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of Denmark and UK in that order. The lower
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
numbers
were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in Belgium and Denmark with 1 and 0. 8
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
euros at the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
.
Moreover
, after five years, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of UK rose up and become the most nation earned from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffees
, with 20
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
euros.
Also
, the other countries
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
grew about 0. 2 to 3
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
euros in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of coffee.

Regarding banana’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
, in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
the 1999
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of UK earned 15
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
euros which was highest compared with 2, 1. 8, 1 and 0. 6 of Denmark, Sweden, Switzerland and Belgium
respectively
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2004
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
upward trends in the banana
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
of UK, Switzerland and Belgium of 47, 5. 5, and 4 in that order while the opposite were true in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of Sweden and Denmark which
were decreased
by about 1
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: "euros".
euro
over the period.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The table charts compare and contrast data on

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
249 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts