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describe a book that made you think about a lot

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I’m going to talk about a book that really made me think, and that has had a positive effect on my life. The name of the book is ‘Atomic Habits’, and it’s about the compounding effect that small decisions and minuscule changes can have on people’s lives. I decided to read Atomic Habits after seeing an interview with the book’s author, James Clear, who is a world-renowned expert in the field of habit formation. In the interview, he told inspiring stories and revealed some simple life hacks that can make people more productive, motivated and happy. I found the whole idea of the ‘science of tiny habits’ fascinating, and so I bought the book straight away. While reading the book, I was forced to confront my own habits and behaviours. I realised that I’m nowhere near as productive as I could be, but that some small tweaks to my routine could make a significant and long-lasting difference. The book also gave me a framework to understand how good habits are formed and how bad habits can be broken. It has encouraged me to analyse my own habits accordingly. I thoroughly enjoyed reading Atomic Habits because I thought it was well researched, well reasoned and well written. The author’s ideas and advice aren’t simply his opinions; they are taken from cutting-edge research and real success stories. I enjoy reading books that change my way of thinking in some way or give me practical, life-altering ideas, and this was definitely one of those books.
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made me
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, and that has had a
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positive
effect on my life. The name of the
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book
is ‘Atomic
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Habits’
, and it’s about the compounding effect that
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small
decisions and minuscule
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changes
can have on
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people
’s
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lives
.

I decided to read Atomic
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Habits
after seeing an interview with the
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book’s
author, James
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Clear
, who is a world-renowned expert in the field of
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habit
formation. In the interview, he
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told
inspiring stories and revealed
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some
simple life hacks that can
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make
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people
more productive, motivated and happy. I found the whole
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idea
of the ‘science of tiny
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habits’
fascinating, and
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so
I
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bought
the
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straight away.

While reading the
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, I
was forced
to confront my
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own
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habits
and
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behaviours
. I
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realised
that I’m nowhere near as productive as I could be,
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that
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some
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small
tweaks to my routine could
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make
a significant and long-lasting difference. The
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also
gave me a framework to understand how
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good
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habits
are formed
and how
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bad
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habits
can
be broken
. It has encouraged me to
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analyse
my
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own
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habits
accordingly
.

I
thoroughly
enjoyed reading Atomic
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Habits
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because
I
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thought
it was well researched, well reasoned and well written. The author’s
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ideas
and advice aren’t
simply
his opinions; they
are taken
from cutting-edge research and real success stories. I enjoy reading
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books
that
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change
my way of thinking in
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some
way or give me practical, life-altering
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ideas
, and this was definitely one of those
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books
.
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IELTS academic describe a book that made you think about a lot

Academic
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4 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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