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The maps give information about a university sports court. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps give information about a university sports court. XEKdE
The given maps depict the development of a university sports court from 1990 to present. Overall, the sports court underwent a number of dramatic changes, with the renovations and relocations of some exsiting features. Moving into details, the park in the north of the area was demolished completely to make way for the basketball court. There was a replacement of the tennis court in place of the car park, which used to be next to the park. Beside relocation, the tennis court was extended with 4 tables in lieu of 2 tables in the past. The cafe and the reception in the north of the area was remained unchanged over the period shown while the outdoor pool next to them was replaced with the indoor pool, which was the same dimensions with the former one. Additionally, the changing room was moved to the East of the court and was extended in the length. Next to the new changing room, there was an appearance of a new fitness centre.
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maps depict the development of a university sports
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court
from 1990 to present.

Overall
, the sports
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court
underwent a number of dramatic
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changes
, with the renovations and relocations of
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exsiting
features.

Moving into
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details
, the park in the north of the area
was demolished
completely to
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make
way for the basketball
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court
. There was a replacement of the tennis
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court
in place of the car park, which
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used
to be
next
to the park. Beside relocation, the tennis
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court
was extended
with 4 tables in lieu of 2 tables in the past.

The
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cafe
and the reception in the north of the area
was remained
unchanged over the period shown while the outdoor pool
next
to them
was replaced
with the indoor pool, which was the same dimensions with the former one.
Additionally
, the changing room was
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moved
to the East of the
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court
and
was extended
in the length.
Next
to the new changing room, there was an appearance of a new fitness
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centre
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