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The diagrams demonstrate the layout of a university’s sports centre and its change upon redevelopment. Overall, there have been some significant changes during the redevelopment of the sports center. The biggest change is the removal of outdoor courts and the addition of other sports instead Currently, there is a building located between two outdoor courts. Inside the building, there is a reception facing the main entrance. From that, people can access the seating area by the door on the right of the reception desk. while the left can access the changing room. In the middle of the building, there is a 25m pool for swimming. According to the second map in the future, the building will be further expanded and the outdoor courts will be replaced as a part of the building. The outdoor court on the left will be renovated into a leisure pool and has a changing room near the entrance while a sports hall and two studios for dancing will be built on the other outdoor courts. The main entrance has two additional things, a sports shop and a cafe at the two corners
The diagrams demonstrate the layout of a university’s
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change
upon redevelopment.

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, there have been
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significant
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changes
during the redevelopment of the
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sports
center. The biggest
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change
is the removal of
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outdoor
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courts
and the addition of other
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instead


Currently
, there is a
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building
located between two
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outdoor
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courts
. Inside the
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building
, there is a reception facing the main entrance. From that,
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people
can access the seating area by the door on the right of the reception desk.
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while
the
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can access the changing room. In the middle of the
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building
, there is a
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25m
pool for swimming.

According to the second map in the future, the
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building
will be
further
expanded and the
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outdoor
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courts
will
be replaced
as a part of the
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building
. The
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outdoor
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on the
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left
will
be renovated
into a leisure pool and has a changing room near the entrance while a
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hall and two studios for dancing will
be built
on the other
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outdoor
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. The main entrance has two additional things, a
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shop and a
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at the two
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