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Reconstruction of university sports centre

Reconstruction of university sports centre PWPgE
A plan is designed to annihilate and reconstruct a “University Sports Centre”, in addition to it, a model is prepared that after the development how will the sports centre look like. At present, the club has its entrance in its south with a reception seat exactly in front of the main gate. Behind it, there is a gigantic swimming pool situated exactly in the middle and the seating, changing room including the gym surrounds the pool. Moreover, there are 2 outdoor courts for different sports and athletic activities. In future, the area of sports centre enlarges by introducing plenitude of other rooms and halls. For instance- one of the outdoor courts will be replaced by a leisure pool that is meant for enjoyment and the other to be transformed into a sports hall. Although there was a changing room, 2 more rooms are introduced on the map, to the next of them, there is a plan to build a sports shop and a cafe. Apart from this, the construction of 2 dance studios will take place in future. Overall, the map of redevelopment in a university sports club is extraordinary that makes the club more sumptuous.
A plan
is designed
to annihilate and reconstruct a “University
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Sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.
Centre
”,
in addition
to it, a model
is prepared
that after the development how will the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
look like.

At present, the club has its entrance in its south with a reception seat exactly in front of the main gate. Behind it, there is a gigantic swimming pool situated exactly in the middle and the seating, changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
including the gym surrounds the pool.
Moreover
, there are 2 outdoor courts for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
and athletic activities.

Did you mean: "In the future"?
In future
, the area of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
enlarges by introducing plenitude of other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
and halls.
For instance
- one of the outdoor courts will
be replaced
by a leisure pool that
is meant
for enjoyment and the other to
be transformed
into a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
hall. Although there was a changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
, 2 more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
are introduced
on the map, to the
next
of them, there is a plan to build a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
shop and a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
. Apart from this, the construction of 2 dance studios will take place
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

Overall
, the map of redevelopment in a university
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
club is extraordinary that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the club more sumptuous.
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