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The charts compare water use ober the world by sections(agricultural, Industrial use, domestic use) and water expending in Brazil and Congi in 2000

The charts compare water use ober the world by sections(agricultural, Industrial use, domestic use) and water expending in Brazil and Congi in 2000 mbRwr

The charts compare water use ober the world by sections(agricultural, Industrial use, domestic use) and water expending in Brazil and Congi in 2000 Overal, there is an increase in all fields of water consumption and agricaltural was main consumer over the given period. Brazil was significant ahead in each person water consuption from Congo, despite of less irrigated land It is clear from the graph that Agrigalture was dominant in water use over the period and peacked its highest point, at 3000 in 2000. Industrial and domestic uses had near figure from 1900 and 1950, at about 100. At the middle of the 20th century, industrial use started growing, after 20years domestic use started, too. They peacked up at about 1200 and 500 respectively in 2000 Brazil was significant ahead from the Congo in population with 170 million people. In Brazil per person had 358m³ water consumption while it wad 8 m³ in Congo. However, Congo had 100m² irrigation land when Brazil's land was only quater of the Congo

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Congi
 in 2000

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, there is an increase in all fields of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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agricaltural
 was main consumer over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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 period. Brazil was significant ahead in each person You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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consuption
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despite of
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clear
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Agrigalture
 was dominant in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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peacked
 its highest point, at 3000 in 2000. Industrial and domestic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
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from 1900 and 1950
, at about 100. At the middle of the 20th century, industrial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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started
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started
, too. They Possible spelling mistake found.peakedpackedpecked
peacked
 up at about 1200 and 500 respectively
 in 2000

Brazil was significant ahead from the Congo in population with 170 million This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. In Brazil per person had Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "358 m"358 m
358m
³ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 consumption while it wad 8 m³ in Congo. However
, Congo had Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "100 m"100 m
100m
² irrigation land when Brazil's land was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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quater
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