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The chart below gives information about the percentage of unemployed Irish citizens and the number of emigrants leaving the country from 1988 to 2008. Summarise The information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the percentage of unemployed Irish citizens and the number of emigrants leaving the country from 1988 to 2008. 3LJVd

The given line graph illustrate the percentage of unemployed Ireland citizens and the number of people leaving the country from 1988 to 2008. Overall, there was a significant decline in the unemployment rate in Ireland, and in addition to this, the number of those leaving the country also reduced over the examined period. Regarding Ireland’s rate of unemployment, after a mild decrease from roughly 17% in 1988 to 13% in 1990, it experienced a slight recovery to about 15% over the following two years. The figure then plummeted to 4% in 2000, followed by a six-year period of stability. However, the unemployment rate of Ireland increased to nearly 6% in the final year. Starting with approximately 60, 000 emigrants in 1988, this number fell to about 55, 000 in 1990 before plunging to over 32, 000 two years later. The number of Ireland’s emigrants continued to go down to around 27, 000 over the next 12 years, and suddenly surged back up to 50, 000 in 2008.

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given
 line graph illustrate the percentage of unemployed Ireland citizens and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 leaving the country from 1988 to 2008.

Overall
, there was a significant decline in the unemployment rate in Ireland, and in addition
 to this, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of those leaving the country also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
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over
 the examined period.

Regarding Ireland’s rate of unemployment, after a mild decrease from roughly 17% in 1988 to 13% in 1990, it experienced a slight recovery to about 15% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 the following two years. The figure then plummeted to 4% in 2000, followed by a six-year period of stability. However
, the unemployment rate of Ireland increased to nearly
 6% in the final year.

Starting with approximately 60, 000 emigrants in 1988, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 fell to about 55, 000 in 1990 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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over
 32, 000 two years later. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Ireland’s emigrants continued to go down to around 27, 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
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 12 years, and suddenly
 surged back up to 50, 000 in 2008. 