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The maps demonstrate Cowlick Arts Centre from 2005 to nowadays

The maps demonstrate Cowlick Arts Centre from 2005 to nowadays PME8X
The maps demonstrate Cowlick Arts Centre from 2005 to nowadays. Overall, we can see all buildings were moved to another place and they were changed. The first concert hall/cinema was the middle of the campus, now it is in the right-hand corner of the campus. Galery is single construction now, which was two structure in the past. In the conscert holls pervious position has central exi ition area in today. The toilet is moved in concert hol's vottom right-hand corner. The stage, drama studio, cafee, outdoor exibition and performence areas were add to the campus. Than information dask was removed and wasteland too and outdoor exibition and performance area were added to westland' position. Fir trees were planted in there. Perviously meeting room was not two building, but at the moment it is two. They are situated in the uppee left - hand corner of the campus. The concert holl and the cinema was dismembered. Cinema is opposite of the central exibition area, that is between of drama studio and concert holl. Drama studio is next to meeting room 1. So, Colwick Art Centre is modificationed, more comfortable and modern.
The maps demonstrate Cowlick Arts
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Centre
from 2005 to nowadays.

Overall
, we can
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all buildings were
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moved
to another
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place and
they were
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changed
.

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first
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concert
hall/cinema was the middle of the campus,
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now
it is in the right-hand corner of the campus.
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Galery
is single construction
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now
, which was two structure in the past. In the
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conscert
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holls
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pervious
position has central
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exi
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ition
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area
in
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today
. The toilet is
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moved
in
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concert
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hol
's
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vottom
right-hand corner. The stage, drama studio,
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cafee
, outdoor
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exibition
and
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performence
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were
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add
to the campus.

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information
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dask
was removed
and wasteland too and outdoor
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exibition
and performance
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westland
' position. Fir trees
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meeting room was not two building,
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uppee
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-
hand corner of the campus. The
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holl
and the cinema
was dismembered
. Cinema is opposite of the central
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exibition
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,
that is
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holl
. Drama studio is
next
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, Colwick Art
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is
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modificationed
, more comfortable and modern.
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