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The flowchart shows the manufacturing process of colored plastic paper clips.

The flowchart shows the manufacturing process of colored plastic paper clips. kbx5n
The pictorial representation illustrates the procedure and methods involved in the production of colourful plastic paper clips. Overall, it is evident that the process has to undergo significant steps to make clips. Although it is lengthy and time consuming process yet all the steps are mandatory to make the end product. However, if a single step is being missed then the whole process may come to halt.
The pictorial representation illustrates the procedure and methods involved in the production of
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colourful
plastic paper clips.
Overall
, it is evident that the process
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has to
undergo significant steps to
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make
clips. Although it is lengthy and
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time consuming
process
yet
all the steps are mandatory to
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make
the
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end
product.
However
, if a single step is
being missed
then the whole process may
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come
to halt.
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IELTS academic The flowchart shows the manufacturing process of colored plastic paper clips.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
67 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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