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The maps below shows the Happy valley shopping centre between 1982 and 2012.

The maps below shows the Happy valley shopping centre between 1982 and 2012. AgDJe
The information about changes in happy valley shopping centre between 1982 and 2012. It is representd by the rendered maps. On having a keen glance over the diagram, in 1982, eastern side of map had sports store and electric store it were replaced in a food store in North side, themed restaurants construct in eastern direction. The South corner had furniture store was replaced in food store. In 2012, elevator (to second floor) and toilets almost remain similar in both maps. Entertainment area was unchanged, it was a situated in middle of the centre. Moving to word, in 2012, built new parking lot in southwest corner in the map. However in 1982 lobby area and coffee shop near the entertainment area both were demolished in 2012 and entrances same in both years. The lake was replaced in furniture retail in western side and trees were almost equal in surrounding area of the centre in both maps. Over all, it can be vividly manifested that the southern corner build new parking lot and themed restaurant in western side in 2012.
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