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Summarice the information by selecting and reporting the main featres, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Foreign Direct Investment Position in the United States, 1998: Parent-Country Shares Japan (16.3%) United Kingdom (18.6%) Netherlands (11.9%) Other (17.8%) Germany (11.7%) Canada (9.2%) Switzerland (6.7%) France (7.7%)

Summarice the information by selecting and reporting the main featres, and make comparisons where relevant. Foreign Direct Investment Position in the United States, 1998: Parent-Country Shares Japan (16. 3%) United Kingdom (18. 6%) Netherlands (11. 9%) Other (17. 8%) Germany (11. 7%) Canada (9. 2%) Switzerland (6. 7%) France (7. 7%) Do0Yp
The pie chart shows the foreign direct investment position in united states is 1998 of parent -country shares in the year 1998. This analysis was done by the us department of commerce bureau of economies The foreign investment positions of united kingdom is high compared the japan and netherland. The emplacement of the United kingdom is 186, where as japans and netherland Position is comparatively less which 16. 3% and netherlands position. is (11. 9)Other countries position is quite impresive when distingueshed to japan and netherland, switzerlands position is too weak (6. 7%) where as canadas and as well as germanys Position is good when compared to france. (7. 7%) However; united kingdoms and other countries as in great Position in the foreign direct investment in united states
The pie chart
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1998 of parent -country

shares in the

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the us
department of commerce bureau of

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of

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united kingdom
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the japan and

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emplacement of the
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186,
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netherland


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16. 3% and
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,
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switzerlands
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foreign direct investment in
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IELTS academic Summarice the information by selecting and reporting the main featres, and make comparisons where relevant. Foreign Direct Investment Position in the United States, 1998: Parent-Country Shares Japan (16. 3%) United Kingdom (18. 6%) Netherlands (11. 9%) Other (17. 8%) Germany (11. 7%) Canada (9. 2%) Switzerland (6. 7%) France (7. 7%)

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