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airport visitors, 1998-2003 ( millions of travellers per year)

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The presented illustration gives data on the number of visitors utilizing three main airports in Britain during the period of six years from 1998 to 2003. In general, what stands out from the graph is that the popularity of all airports registered growth over the period covered by the question. Looking at the graph in more detail, Heathrow airport witnessed a striking increase in the number of travellers during the first three years and hit the peak in 2000 with 48, 2 million passengers. However, in the next two years, it experienced a dramatic decline by 11 from 48, 2 to 33, 2 million in 2001, after which the number recovered to 45, 6 million in 2003. While Heathrow saw both significant growth and drop in the number of travellers throughout given years, the number of tourists utilizing the Gatwick airport increased steadily during the time, from 36, 5 million in the first year to 69, 3 million in the last year. Moving on to Stansted, its reputation rocketed during the first four years, which went up by 26 from 17, 3 to 43, 3 million. Additionally, the number of passengers remained stable in the following years.
The presented illustration gives data on the
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of visitors utilizing three main
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in Britain during the period of six years from 1998 to 2003.

In general
, what stands out from the graph is that the popularity of all
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airports
registered growth over the period covered by the question.

Looking at the graph in more detail, Heathrow
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airport
witnessed a striking increase in the
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of
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travellers
during the
first
three years and hit the peak in 2000 with 48, 2
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passengers.
However
, in the
next
two years, it experienced a dramatic decline by 11 from 48, 2 to 33, 2
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million
in 2001, after which the
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recovered to 45, 6
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million
in 2003. While Heathrow
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both significant growth and drop in the
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of
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travellers
throughout
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given
years, the
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of tourists utilizing the Gatwick
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increased
steadily
during the time, from 36, 5
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million
in the
first
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to 69, 3
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in the last
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. Moving on to
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Stansted
, its reputation rocketed during the
first
four years, which went up by 26 from 17, 3 to 43, 3
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.
Additionally
, the
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of passengers remained stable in the following years.
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