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The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico on International flights, 2005- 2010.

The graph below gives information about the origin of passengers entering Mexico on International flights, 2005- 2010. 8L8Jk
The bar chart compares the number of passengers entering Mexico on International flights in a six years of period, from 2005 to 2010. Generally speaking, there is a huge contrast between the four territories, namely Canada, USA, Europe as well as South America. The most number of passengers entered from the USA whilst the lowest number of voyagers were reported from South America overall the years compared. The USA seemed to have been increasing in numbers, it reached its highest in the year 2007, until a sudden drop, which can be observed on the chart between 2008 and 2009. Europe also displayed a progressive growth, until the exact year the USA experienced a slump. Compared to Europe and the USA through the years Canada has shown a gradual growth. As a result Canada had out-reached Europe in the last two years displayed on the chart. Until 2010 South America had the lowest number in each year showing minimal growth, and consistency.
The bar chart compares the
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of passengers entering Mexico on International flights in a six years of period, from 2005 to 2010.

Generally
speaking, there is a huge contrast between the four territories,
namely
Canada, USA, Europe
as well
as South America. The most
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number
of passengers entered from the USA whilst the lowest
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number
of voyagers
were reported
from South America
overall
the years compared.

The USA seemed to have been increasing in
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numbers
, it reached its highest in the
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year
2007, until a sudden drop, which can
be observed
on the chart between 2008 and 2009. Europe
also
displayed a progressive growth, until the exact
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year
the USA experienced a slump.

Compared to Europe and the USA through the years Canada has shown a gradual growth.

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a result Canada had out-reached Europe in the last two years displayed on the chart.

Until 2010 South America had the lowest
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number
in each
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year
showing minimal growth, and consistency.
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