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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the informationby selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. L1Y8
The line chart compares the changes occurred in the number of criminal accidents, from burglary to car theft and rubbery, in the inner Newport city center over a 9-year period. It's clear that burglary rates are of the highest number of crime taken place compared to the other two until the 2006, while robberies seem to be the least happend crime by the offenders over the entire time frame. In 2003, the number of burglaries were reported the most at about 3400 times and only a year after, people pf Newport city were attacked by burglarers more than 3750 times, which was the highest number of incidents reported through the whole 9-year period. Between 2006-2007, the figure for the car theft overtook the burglary and rose to 2800 approximately. From 2004, the figure for the burglary rates saw a drastic decrease by 2600 times and after a sparse to 1400 by 2009, it continued to occur yet stable over the next 3-years. Meanwhile, the robbery rates didn't change much and only a sparse fluctuation was seen which didn't pass the 500-800 robberies from 2003 to 2012.
The line chart compares the
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changes
occurred in the
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number
of criminal accidents, from
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burglary
to car theft and rubbery, in the inner Newport city center over a
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9-year
period.

It's
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clear
that
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burglary
rates are of the highest
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number
of crime taken place compared to the other two until the 2006, while robberies seem to be the least
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happend
crime by the offenders over the entire
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time
frame.

In 2003, the
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number
of
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burglaries
were reported
the most at about 3400
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times
and
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only
a
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year
after,
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people
pf Newport city
were attacked
by
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burglarers
more than 3750
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times
, which was the highest
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number
of incidents reported through the whole
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9-year
period. Between 2006-2007, the figure for the car theft overtook the
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burglary
and rose to 2800 approximately.

From 2004, the figure for the
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burglary
rates
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saw
a drastic decrease by 2600
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times
and after a sparse to 1400 by 2009, it continued to occur
yet
stable over the
next
3-years. Meanwhile, the robbery rates didn't
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change
much and
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only
a sparse fluctuation was
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seen
which didn't pass the 500-800 robberies from 2003 to 2012.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012.

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