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Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities of Australia

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The graph represents the percentage of people living in different cities, having caffeine and tea on daily basis, in Australia. Overall, the five cities of Australia, which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart, where the Australians have habits of buying a fresh coffee or instant coffee, and going to a cafe for drinking either tea or coffee, in last four weeks. The percent of residents consuming a freshly made coffee is almost highest, which is in a range of 40-45%, in Sydney as well as Melbourne, but is least in Brisbane town, almost 35%. But Brisbane is the one of the highest seller of instant coffee, which is about 55% of residents. In cities like Adelaide and Hobart, the fresh coffee is sold to Australians, about 35% and 40%, respectively. Melbourne has the highest café customers for drinking tea or coffee, about 65%, whereas stands almost second, for preserved coffee business. Also, Hobart is has the maximum customers who consume coffee or tea in a café, almost 65%.
The graph represents the percentage of
people
living in
different
cities, having caffeine and
tea
on daily basis, in Australia.

Overall
, the five cities of Australia, which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart, where the Australians have habits of buying a fresh
coffee
or instant
coffee
, and going to a
cafe
for drinking either
tea
or
coffee
, in last four weeks.

The percent of residents consuming a
freshly
made
coffee
is
almost
highest, which is in a range of 40-45%, in Sydney
as well
as Melbourne,
but
is least in Brisbane town,
almost
35%.
But
Brisbane is the one of the highest seller of instant
coffee
, which is about 55% of residents. In cities like Adelaide and Hobart, the fresh
coffee
is sold
to Australians, about 35% and 40%,
respectively
.

Melbourne has the highest café customers for drinking
tea
or
coffee
, about 65%, whereas stands
almost
second, for preserved
coffee
business.
Also
, Hobart is has the maximum customers who consume
coffee
or
tea
in a café,
almost
65%.
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IELTS academic Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities of Australia

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