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The maps below show the frenton town in 1990 and 2012 .

The maps below show the frenton town in 1990 and 2012. weRnY
The frenton town illustrate the development in 1990 and 2012 depicted by the maps. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, school, library and theatre remained intact in frenton town. Moreover, some building were change. To begin with, the school and library in the west side of the high street remain unchanged. The bank in the west side was demolished to make space for a restaurant. Moreover, the hospital was expanded for the citicens people. While, the playing field in the north of side was replaced with the number of blocks of flats. Whereas the tress in the south-west side was cut down for a technopark. On the other hand, the cafe and park in the east side of the high street was repalced by the hotel and golf course. The house is east side of the frenton town were reconstruced in to blocks of flats and there were also flats in north side of the town. The theatre is south-east side of the town remain unchanged. Finally, in the south side of the town, the shops were replaced with the supermarket respectively.
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frenton
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illustrate the development in 1990 and 2012 depicted by the maps.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that, school, library and
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theatre
remained intact in
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frenton
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town
.
Moreover
,
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some
building
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were
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change
.

To
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begin
with, the school and library in the west side of the high street remain unchanged. The bank in the west side
was demolished
to
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make
space for a restaurant.
Moreover
, the hospital
was expanded
for the
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citicens
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people
.
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While
, the playing field in the north of side
was replaced
with the number of blocks of flats. Whereas the tress in the south-west side was
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cut
down for a
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technopark
.

On the other hand
, the
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cafe
and park in the east side of the high street was
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repalced
by the hotel and golf course. The
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house
is east side of the
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frenton
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town
were
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reconstruced
in to blocks of flats and there were
also
flats in north side of the
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town
. The
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theatre
is south-east side of the
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town
remain unchanged.
Finally
, in the south side of the
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town
, the shops
were replaced
with the supermarket
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the frenton town in 1990 and 2012.

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