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the tow maps high light about kimsville 2002 and today summarise the details

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The two maps display the differences between the existing and the 2002 layout of the Kimville. It is obvious that some locations of buildings were changed or removed and some buildings have been added. In 2002, every corners in Kimsville had forests. However, Nowadays, the north-west corner and the south-west corner forest are removed and add new buildings. In present time, new apartments has been added to the top-left corner and the football stadium has been built in the south-left corner of the city. In 2002, the factory has been knocked down to make way for a software company and the shopping center and the city center sill the same as before. As well as, the north-east and the south-east sides did not restore. The new train station has been built let to the city centre. The old cinema center has been reconstructed to the pub. The map has a clear overall progression and organisation as it is introduced, then it clearly compares the at map with the present.
The two maps display the differences between the existing and the 2002 layout of the
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Kimville
. It is obvious that
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some
locations of buildings were
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changed
or removed and
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some
buildings have been
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added
.

In 2002, every
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corners
in
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Kimsville
had forests.
However
, Nowadays, the north-west
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corner
and the south-west
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corner
forest
are removed
and
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add
new buildings. In present time, new apartments has been
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added
to the top-
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left
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corner
and the football stadium has
been built
in the south-
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left
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corner
of the city. In 2002, the factory has
been knocked
down to
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make
way for a software
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company
and the shopping center and the city center sill the same as
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before
.
As well
as, the north-east and the south-east sides did not restore. The new train station has
been built
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let
to the city
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centre
. The
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old
cinema center has
been reconstructed
to the pub.

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The
map has a
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clear
overall
progression and
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organisation
as it
is introduced
, then it
clearly
compares the at map with the present.
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IELTS academic the tow maps high light about kimsville 2002 and today summarise the details

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