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The maps below show the changes that have taken places at the paradise island.

The maps below show the changes that have taken places at the paradise island. Q5PYy

The given maps demonstrate how the paradise island underwent a series of changes over some time. Overall, the maps gave an overview of how an island named paradise island turned into an artificial island from a natural island. Back in the past, Boats were used as transportation and the scale of the pier was small. Besides the pier, there was a beach that was completely open for all. However, in the present, the pier has been developed and Cruise ships are used for carrying people and goods. Now, permission is required for accessing the beach. Previously the North East area from the pier was covered with trees. There was also a Scientific Research centre. Now, all the trees are chopped down and the Scientific Research centre has been replaced with a Hotel complex and a swimming pool. present time, there is an open restaurant at the east side of the Hotel complex, and an area beside the Restaurant is reserved for BBQ. These places once were covered with forest. Before, There was a Natural spring at the east side of the island and also a hill area at the Northeast from spring. Anyhow, current time Natural spring and Hill area remain unchanged but a cafe has been constructed near the fountain and a scenic lookout has been build on the Rocks. Currently, a cycle path is completely covered by Paradise Island.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps demonstrate how the paradise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 underwent a series of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 over This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time.

Overall
, the maps gave an overview of how an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 named paradise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 turned into an artificial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 from a natural island.

Back in the past, Boats were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as transportation and the scale of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpromenadedockwharfjettydam
pier
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
. Besides
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpromenadedockwharfjettydam
pier
, there was a beach that was completely open for all. However
, in the present, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpromenadedockwharfjettydam
pier
 has been developed
 and Cruise ships are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for carrying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, permission is required
 for accessing the beach.

Previously the North East You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpromenadedockwharfjettydam
pier
was covered
 with trees. There was also
 a Scientific Research Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, all the trees are chopped
 down and the Scientific Research Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 has been replaced
 with a Hotel complex and a swimming pool.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPresent
present
 time, there is an open restaurant at the east side of the Hotel complex, and an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 beside the Restaurant is reserved
 for BBQ. These places once were covered
 with forest.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
, There was a Natural spring at the east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 and also
 a hill You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 at the Northeast from spring. Anyhow, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 time Natural spring and Hill You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 remain unchanged This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 has been constructed
 near the fountain and a scenic lookout has been build on the Rocks. Currently
, a cycle path is completely covered by Paradise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
Island
. 