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The chart show us the comparision of percentages of donations made between 2000 and 2015 by the Canadian population. We can identify the age range of donors is among 18 to 65 and over. However, in 2000 the highest donors percentages was by 35 ti 49 age group with a 39% and the lowest with a 20% by 18 to 24 age range, while in 2015, the most common donors was by 50 to 64 age group almost similar that in 2000 with 37% and the lowest with a 11% by 18-24 age group. However, it is posible to observe that in 2015 exist an increase of percentage of donations on the contrary in 2000 the percentage decrease, even so, both year smaintain the same range of donations no less than 10%, and they also agree that the youngest group was the least interested in donating differently than age 35 and over.

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