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Manufacturing instant noodle

Manufacturing instant noodle 6L38K

The diagram describes the standard procedure of instant noodles manufacturing. The entire process includes eight steps in total, and I will illustrate the main features first and will support them with relevant items. In the first stage, flour(the raw material) is delivered by trucks and keep them in the storage silos. After that, flour is transferred to the mixer secondly and mixed with water and oil before passing to rollers as dough sheets. Those sheets are cut with the machine upon the roller to produce dough strips. From strips to noodle discs are transformed in stage five, moreover, are cooked with oil and are dried along with the tray. After drying noodles discs, they are filled in cups together with vegetables and spices. In the finishing stage, noodle cups are labeled and sealed, and ready to deliver to the customers.

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describes
 the standard procedure of instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 manufacturing. The entire process includes eight steps in total, and I will illustrate the main features first
 and will support them with relevant items.

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 stage, flour(the raw material) is delivered
 by trucks and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 them in the storage silos. After that, flour is transferred
 to the mixer secondly
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before
 passing to rollers as dough sheets. Those sheets are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 with the machine upon the roller to produce dough strips. From strips to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 discs are transformed
 in stage five, moreover
, are cooked
 with oil and are dried
 along with the tray.

After drying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 discs, they are filled
 in cups together with vegetables and spices. In the finishing stage, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 cups are labeled
 and sealed, and ready to deliver to the customers. 