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The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. 2eyX

The diagrams present information about the developments at Queen Mary Hospital The illustrations display how much progress the hospital experienced from 1960 to 2000. Overall, the hospital encountered drastic changes for the past 40 years. It was evident that between three different reconstructions, Queen Mary Hospital was the only infrastructure that was not affected. In 1960, the hospital was founded along the main road and across a shopping centre. There was also a car park which was located at the opposite directions of a farmland and the hospital. It is seen that a farmland was the biggest establishment in the block. After two decades, a cancer centre and a pharmacy were built in the same location where a shopping centre formerly stand. On the other side of these two properties, it was observable that a farmland was converted to a nursing school. The hospital and a car park remained the same. In 2000, additional improvements happened where a cancer centre was expanded on the southern part and occupied the old spot of a nursing school. It was noticeable that a nursing school was moved in the middle of a cancer centre and a car park. The latter, together with a nursing school, were restored twice as small as what it used to be.

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