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The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. bp6l
The assigned three pie charts illustrates the three types of nutrients are might be unhealthy in regular meal. Overall, It is lucid that the maximum chunk was taken by sodium in dinner, whereas the smallest slice was take by sodium in breakfast in these three pie charts. At a fleeting glance, It is immensely clear that in these charts, the largest slice was grabbed by sodium in dinner at 43%, whereas the smallest chunk is taken by breakfast in sodium around 14%. Initiating at saturated fat, the lion share was taken by dinner at 37% saturated fat, whilst only 16% people were eating minimum saturated fat. Moving further, sugar was 16% consumed by breakfast just similar as saturated fat breakfast, whereas the largest slice was taken by sugary snacks at 42%. While 23% people eat sugar in dinner and 19% sugar in lunch on their regular basis.
The assigned three pie charts illustrates the three types of nutrients are might be unhealthy in regular meal.

Overall
, It is lucid that the maximum chunk
was taken
by sodium in
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dinner
, whereas the smallest slice was take by sodium in
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breakfast
in these three pie charts.

At a fleeting glance, It is
immensely
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clear
that in these charts, the largest slice
was grabbed
by sodium in
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dinner
at 43%, whereas the smallest chunk
is taken
by
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breakfast
in sodium around 14%. Initiating at
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saturated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
, the lion share
was taken
by
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dinner
at 37%
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saturated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
, whilst
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
16%
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people
were eating minimum
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saturated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
.

Moving
further
, sugar was 16% consumed by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
breakfast
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just
similar as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saturated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
breakfast
, whereas the largest slice
was taken
by sugary snacks at 42%. While 23%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
eat sugar in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dinner
and 19% sugar in lunch on their regular basis.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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