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The bar chart shows water use in gulf countries in 2000.

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The bar chart gives information about how much water is consumed for domestic, agriculture and industrial use in six different countries in 2000. In general, Oman and Saudi Arabia accounted for the largest amount of agricultural use of water, while there was the highest demand for domestic use of water. With regard to agriculture use of water, more than 80% of water is consumed by Oman and Saudi Arabia. The second largest group is Qatar and UAE, sharing approximately equal amount of 60%. This figure is similar to the total consumption by Bahrain and Kuwait at nearly 40% and 20% respectively. However, if we look at domestic use of water both Kuwait and Bahrain require more than 50% of water use. This figure is nearly twice as high as for the second largest group. In contrast, most countries experience a low level of industiral use of water, but only Kuwait consume relatively high of 20%.
The bar chart gives information about how much
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by Oman and Saudi Arabia. The second largest group is Qatar and UAE, sharing approximately equal amount of 60%. This figure is similar to the total consumption by Bahrain and Kuwait at
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Kuwait consume
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows water use in gulf countries in 2000.

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