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The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. Jxy5

The chart gives information about the selling assessment of jeans for two retail stores. The data compares figures reported in Turkey for the incoming year. Overall, one can conclude that Jack & Jones Co. is expected to get the highest sales of jeans by December next year. Meanwhile, it can also be observed that Mango Co. will be obtaining the lowest selling point of pairs early next year in February. In detail, one can see that Mango Co. will get its top sales later next year with 600, 000 jeans. It is also clear that similar rate of sales is viewed roughly with 500, 000 pairs between the months of August and November. On the other hand, July will attain an estimated 400, 000 sold jeans which will be followed by a closely range of figures from 100, 000 to 200, 000 in January to June. The month that will take the bottom spot of Mango Co. ’s record is the month of February. Meanwhile, Jack & Jones Co. will be predicted to rise on highest peak of sales in December with approximately 900, 000 pairs. It is notable that there is a comparison of transaction circling within 600, 000 in September and October, as well as distantly chasing by July and August with relatively 350, 000. However, in the early months of next year, February to June, one can notice the increasing numbers of demand from 250, 000 to 400, 000. While February is suspected to be the least in demand with 250, 000 pairs, it can be identified that the month before which is January will be 50 percent less of the best sales for next year.

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