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The only establishment in the island in the past was a scientific research station, which was accessed via water at the West. A pier was located in the West, which allowed visitors from boats and a beach was there towards the Northwest of the island. Towards the East, there existed a natural spring and at the Northeast, some rocks. The most visible change is the transformation of the research station to a hotel with swimming pool access towards its North. The pier at the West is seen developed to allow passengers from a cruise ship to embark and disembark. Towards the East of the hotel, an open restaurant is started with BBQ facility and towards further East, a cafe is set up. A scenic lookout is arranged at the rocks in the North east. Swimming is now permitted in the beach. Another development is the cycle path, which is connected to all these facilities.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 establishment The usual preposition for “island” is “on”, not “in”.on the island
in the island
 in the past was a scientific research station, which was accessed
 via water at the West. A pier was located
 in the West, which This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 visitors from boats and a beach was there towards the Northwest of the island. Towards the East, there existed a natural spring and at the Northeast, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 rocks.

The most visible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is the transformation of the research station to a hotel with swimming pool access towards its North. The pier at the West is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 developed to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 passengers from a cruise ship to embark and disembark. Towards the East of the hotel, an open restaurant is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with BBQ facility and towards further
 East, a ‘cafe’ is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using “café”café
cafe
is set
 up. A scenic lookout is arranged
 at the rocks in the North east. Swimming is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 permitted in the beach. Another development is the cycle path, which is connected
 to all these facilities. 