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Comparing the 3 great deserts of the world

These charts show information about Sahara, Taklimakan, and Great Basin deserts. Regarding the size, the Sahara Desert is the biggest desert with a 9 million square kilometer area. The second-largest desert is Great Basin with a size of about 300000 square kilometers. Taklimakan Desert is the smallest desert on the list, which is almost 30000 square kilometers smaller than the Great Basin desert. The second parameter assessed in the table is the average rainfall. Taklimakan is the aridest among is 3 deserts. Great basin desert has the greatest amount of precipitation by having up to 51 centimeters of average annual rainfall. By comparing the average temperatures in summer and winter, we can conclude that Taklimakan has the coldest winter with an average temperature of -9 centigrade. Sara and great basin desert have the hottest summer showing 30 Celsius degree average temperature. In total, the Sahara has the hottest weather among these three deserts. By investigating the extreme temperatures it is noted that the hottest temperature is recorded in the Sahara desert with a top of 58 centigrade degrees which is 1 degree upper than the Great Basin Desert highest temperature recorded. Also, the table shows that the Taklimakan has experienced the coldest weather extreme recording and -26. 1 centigrade degrees.
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deserts. Regarding the size, the
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Sahara
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is the biggest
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with a 9 million square kilometer area. The second-largest
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is
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with a size of about 300000 square kilometers.
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is the smallest
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on the list, which is almost 30000 square kilometers smaller than the
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rainfall.
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aridest
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has the greatest amount of precipitation by having up to 51 centimeters of
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annual rainfall. By comparing the
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in summer and winter, we can conclude that
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has the coldest winter with an
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of -9 centigrade. Sara and
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have the hottest summer showing 30 Celsius
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. In total, the
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has the hottest weather among these three deserts. By investigating the extreme
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with a top of 58 centigrade
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which is 1
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