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The graph illustrates about the visitors and their staying pattern in a particular Caribean island between the years in 2010 and 2017

The graph illustrates about the visitors and their staying pattern in a particular Caribean island between the years in 2010 and 2017. It is seen that in 2010 there were approximately 250000 visitors staying on the cruise ship while 750000 visitors were staying in the island and the total number of visitors were 1 million. In the year of 2011 the umber of visitors who stayed in the island remained same as earlier year when the cruise visitors became doble as 500000 and the total number of visitors increased as well. However, the staying in island vistors were increase in the next couple of years which reached to 1. 5 millions by 2013. On the other hand, on cruise visitors were fluctuate slightly and remain same in 2013 and the total number of visitors reach to 2 millions per year by 2013. In land staying visitors were remained plataue for the next 2 years while on cruise visitors increase dramatically to 1. 25 millions in 2015 and the total number of visitors increased as well. Nonetheless, in 2016 when the visitors who were staying on cruise cross the total number of visitors staying in island as 1500000 and 1250000 comparitively and the total number of visitors were same as the earlier year. But, in the final year in 2017 we can see a dramatical rise for the every aspects, 1. 5 million in land visitors while on cuise visitors reached to it’s highest peack 2 million and the total number of visitors as well to 3500000.
The graph illustrates about the
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Caribean
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island
between the years in 2010 and 2017.

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that in 2010 there were approximately 250000
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visitors
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staying
on the
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cruise
ship while 750000
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visitors
were
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staying
in the
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island
and the
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total
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number
of
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visitors
were 1
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million
. In the
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year
of 2011 the umber of
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visitors
who stayed in the
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island
remained same as earlier
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year
when the
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cruise
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visitors
became
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doble
as 500000 and the
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total
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number
of
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visitors
increased
as well
.
However
, the
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staying
in
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island
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vistors
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were
increase in the
next
couple of years which reached to 1. 5
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millions
by 2013.
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, on
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cruise
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visitors
were
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fluctuate
slightly
and remain same in 2013 and the
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total
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number
of
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reach to 2
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millions
per
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year
by 2013. In land
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staying
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visitors
were remained
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plataue
for the
next
2 years while on
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cruise
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visitors
increase
dramatically
to 1. 25
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millions
in 2015 and the
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number
of
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visitors
increased
as well
.

Nonetheless, in 2016 when the
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cruise
cross the
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
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as 1500000 and 1250000
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comparitively
and the
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.
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, in the final
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in 2017 we can
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a
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dramatical
rise for the every
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, 1. 5
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million
in land
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visitors
while on
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cuise
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reached to it’s highest
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peack
2
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million
and the
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total
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of
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to 3500000.
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