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The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.

In the given diagram shows us about how electricity is generated by hydroelectric dam. It shows us a hydroelectric dam next to the water. First step, the reservior water flows through a tunnel called penstrock which helps the water which helps us to pass through turbine. The running water helps the turbine continously which creates an energy passing through a generater. The Powerhouse contains power lines connected to the generator. The carries huge watts of electricity and passing through the city at long distances.
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turbine. The running
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the turbine
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the city at long distances.

IELTS academic The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.

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