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The bar graph is a representation of south lands main export of products such as international tourism dairy products and meat products According to above shown graph a continuous growth has been seen in the international tourism till the year 2015 to 9 billion as expected to be around 10 billion by the year 2025 on the other hand a drop is expected in the export of meat product that was around 6 billion till around 2000 to a drop of around 5 billion around 2025.

The bar graph is a representation of south lands main export of products such as international tourism dairy products and meat products According to above shown graph a continuous growth has been seen in the international tourism till the year 2015 to 9 billion as expected to be around 10 billion by the year 2025 on the other hand a drop is expected in the export of meat product that was around 6 billion till around 2000 to a drop of around 5 billion around 2025. Dllxo
The bar graph is a representation of south lands main export of products such as international tourism dairy products and meat products According to above shown graph a continuous growth has been seen in the international tourism till the year 2015 to 9 billion as expected to be around 10 billion by the year 2025 on the other hand a drop is expected in the export of meat product that was around 6 billion till around 2000 to a drop of around 5 billion around 2025. Dairy products has also been one of the most important export factor in south lands which has led to great hike in the recent following years but as expected will see a fall in the coming following years
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in the international tourism till the
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2015 to 9
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2025

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in the export of meat
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export factor in south lands which has led to great hike in the recent following years
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IELTS academic The bar graph is a representation of south lands main export of products such as international tourism dairy products and meat products According to above shown graph a continuous growth has been seen in the international tourism till the year 2015 to 9 billion as expected to be around 10 billion by the year 2025 on the other hand a drop is expected in the export of meat product that was around 6 billion till around 2000 to a drop of around 5 billion around 2025.

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