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The mentioned bar graph illustrates the data about three main exports of Southland namely international tourism, dairy products and meat products in past years, present scenario and prediction for future: 2000, 2018 and 2025 respectively.

The mentioned bar graph illustrates the data about three main exports of Southland namely international tourism, dairy products and meat products in past years, present scenario and prediction for future: 2000, 2018 and 2025 respectively. awwNV
The mentioned bar graph illustrates the data about three main exports of Southland namely international tourism, dairy products and meat products in past years, present scenario and prediction for future: 2000, 2018 and 2025 respectively. Overall, as is presented by the bar graph, it can be seen that international tourism is in growing trend from the past to future whereas export of dairy products show the fluctuating nature. Moreover, the gradual decrement in export of meat products is observed from 2000 to 2025. It is evident that in 2000 international tourism had dominated other exports($8 billion) which is followed by dairy products approximately ($7 billion) and meat products exactly ($6 billion). Similarly, at present (2018) dairy products have reached nearly the peak while international tourism is lagging behind by around ($1 billion) from tourism. Likewise, meat products have significantly low rate of exports with only near about ($5. 5 billion). However, in 2025, tourism industries will account the highest ratio and almost reach the summit ($10 billion). Moreover, it is forecasted that dairy products will slightly decrease by near about half billion and will have figure of approximately ($9. 5 billion). In addition, it has been already claimed that meat products are going to decline moderately and reach ($5 billion) in near future.
The mentioned bar graph illustrates the data about three main
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exports
of Southland
namely
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international
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tourism
,
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dairy
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products
and
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meat
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products
in past years, present scenario and prediction for future: 2000, 2018 and 2025
respectively
.

Overall
, as
is presented
by the bar graph, it can be
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seen
that
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international
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tourism
is in growing trend from the past to future whereas
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export
of
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dairy
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products
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show
the fluctuating nature.
Moreover
, the gradual decrement in
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export
of
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meat
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products
is observed
from 2000 to 2025.

It is evident that in 2000
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international
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tourism
had dominated other
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exports($8
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billion)
which
is followed
by
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dairy
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products
approximately ($7
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billion)
and
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meat
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products
exactly ($6
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billion)
.
Similarly
, at present (2018)
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dairy
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products
have reached
nearly
the peak while
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international
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tourism
is lagging behind by around ($1
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billion)
from
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tourism
.
Likewise
,
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meat
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products
have
significantly
low rate of
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exports
with
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only
near about ($5. 5 billion).

However
, in 2025,
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tourism
industries will account the highest ratio and almost reach the summit ($10
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billion)
.
Moreover
, it
is forecasted
that
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dairy
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products
will
slightly
decrease by near about half
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billion
and will have figure of approximately ($9. 5
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billion)
.
In addition
, it has been already claimed that
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meat
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products
are going to decline
moderately
and reach ($5
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billion)
in near future.
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IELTS academic The mentioned bar graph illustrates the data about three main exports of Southland namely international tourism, dairy products and meat products in past years, present scenario and prediction for future: 2000, 2018 and 2025 respectively.

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