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The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now. VlKa6

The maps indicate several significant changes in Riverage College over a period of 30 years. Overall, it is noticeable that the college has been changed substantially, with some new additional features being added to the site and a number of rooms being converted for different uses. The only facilities that haven’t been changed on the site in the 30 years are the Sport Hall, the Library, and the Reception. The terrace located between the library and the Sport Hall still remains in place though the adjacent flower garden is now a set of steps. The old car park has been removed and trees planted in its place. The four office rooms previously located above the Reception have since been replaced with an Art class room, and the offices combined into one larger space now located above the library, where the refectory once was. Below the library a café has now replaced what was once the common room, and a new room has also been constructed underneath the Reception which is now used as a Music room.

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