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The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.

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The bar graph depicts the annual porpotion of the number of people who visited the three museums, namely MET Museum (New York), Edo Museum (Tokyo), and National Museum (China), over a half decade between 2000 and 2005. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the National Museum in China was the most popular Museum in 2005, whereas the Edo Museum in Tokyo become the least interesting museum for people, over two periods between 2001 and 2002. Looking at the details, the MET Museum was the most popular in the first three years. This trend stood at 13. 5 million throughout 2 years and decreased to just under 10 million in 2002. At which point, it become less popular at 6, 1 million in 2005 and extended two times approximately at 8. 1 million in the end of the period. In contrast, the National was the most successful museum in maintaining the trend. The figure stood at 6 million then fluctuated in any given year. Whereas, 12 million of visitors went to the Edo Museum in 2001 and doubled to 14 million in 2005.

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