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a table related to independent films released in the UK and Ireland by genre in 2012.

a table related to independent films released in the UK and Ireland by genre in 2012. nRboe
The table chart illustrates the number of films which released in the UK and Ireland in the 2012, furthermore, also depicts the rate of income which earn through ticket sales during same time interval. It is seen from the graph that, total 26 comedy movies had released in both country and around 45. 4% profit had earned by comedy movies. Moreover, the number of thriller and horror movie remained same, around 13-14 %. However, both country earned more money from horror movies instead of thriller movies. In addition, citizens of the UK and the Ireland preferred to watch more movies which based on documentary as well as drama stories. Thus, both movies has highest percentage of released rate approximately 23. 6% throughout the year. On the other hand, only 4% of action movies released in 2012. Furthermore, 4. 1% of income had earned by action movies. Whereas, released rate of both romance and others movies had under 10%. However, 0. 8 and 3. 2 percentage of money get through this two types of movies respectively. Overall, although drama and documentary movies were highest released up to 30% rate, money got from comedy movies showed highest trend.
The table chart illustrates the number of films which
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released
in the UK and Ireland in the 2012,
furthermore
,
also
depicts the
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rate
of income which earn through ticket sales during same time interval.

It is
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seen
from the graph that, total 26 comedy
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movies
had
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released
in both country and around 45. 4% profit had earned by comedy
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movies
.
Moreover
, the number of thriller and horror
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movie
remained same, around 13-14 %.
However
, both country earned more money from horror
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movies
instead
of thriller
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movies
.
In addition
, citizens of the UK and the Ireland preferred to
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watch
more
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movies
which based on documentary
as well
as drama stories.
Thus
, both
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movies
has
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highest
percentage of
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released
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rate
approximately 23. 6% throughout the year.

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,
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only
4% of action
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movies
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released
in 2012.
Furthermore
, 4. 1% of income had earned by action
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movies
. Whereas,
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released
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rate
of both romance
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and others
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movies
had under 10%.
However
, 0. 8 and 3. 2 percentage of money
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get
through this two types of
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movies
respectively
.

Overall
, although drama and documentary
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movies
were highest
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released
up to 30%
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rate
, money
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got
from comedy
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movies
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showed
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IELTS academic a table related to independent films released in the UK and Ireland by genre in 2012.

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