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reporting the layout of a university's sports center now and after redevelopments

reporting the layout of a university's sports center now and after redevelopments nRbme

The given maps illustrate how the layout of a university's sports site is expected to be modified during redevelopments in the future. Overall, there will be a considerable modification in terms of facilities and constructions. At the present plane, the main sports complex is located in the middle of the site and two separated outdoor courts are situated in the eastern and western parts. a 25m-pool lies in the heart of the complex. In order to achieve the pool, clients should pass the entrance and reception in the south which connect to the pool through a changing room on the left. There are also seating places for the viewers in the east of the pool just behind the gym. As for the future layout, sports center separated sites are projected to be merged and expanded in size so that a new leisure pool in the top left corner just above a new changing room and sports shop will be established. While the former main building’s facilities except for the gym, which will expand to the east, will not change, the eastern outdoor courts are going to demolish and replace with a new sports hall next to the pool’s seating and also two dance studio in the north of a new changing room and cafe along the entrance.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps illustrate how the layout of a university's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 site is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be modified
 during redevelopments in the future. Overall
, there will be a considerable modification in terms of facilities and constructions.

At the present This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
, the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 complex is located
 in the middle of the site and two separated outdoor courts are situated
 in the eastern and western parts. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterA
a
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "25 m"25 m
25m
-pool lies in the heart of the complex. In order to achieve the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool
, clients should pass the entrance and reception in the south which connect to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool
 through a changing room on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
. There are also
 seating places for the viewers in the east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 behind the gym.

As for the future layout, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 center separated sites are projected
 to be merged
 and expanded in size This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 leisure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool
 in the top This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 above a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 changing room and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 shop will be established
. While the former main building’s facilities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the gym, which will expand to the east, will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
, the eastern outdoor courts are going to demolish and replace with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall next
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool’s
 seating and also
 two dance Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: "studios".studios
studio
 in the north of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 changing room and 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 along the entrance. 