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The maps below show colwick arts centre in 2005 and today

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This floor plant illustrates the expansion of colwick art center between 2005 and today. as it can be seen some huge changes were made in buildings and constructing new section. In the past, two galleries were located on the right-hand side that joined together and relocated on left-hand-side of the map. The old buildings were constructed as a concert hall. A huge building in the center of the map was used for the concert hall and cinema that today is demolished. central exhibition area and a new building for cinema are built on that location. Toilet building on the left side was moved to the opposite side, below the new concert hall and become smaller. A café is built between the new gallery and outdoor exhibition area. There was a snack bar in the north-west that completely destroyed and meeting room below it was separated into two building that replaced with snack bar. A new building is created between today cinema and meeting rooms that use as drama studio. wasteland in the bottom of the map became an outdoor exhibition area and performance area. A lot of trees are planted and several bench tables add to it.
This floor plant illustrates the expansion of
colwick
art center between 2005 and
today
.
as
it can be
seen
some
huge
changes
were made
in
buildings
and constructing
new
section.

In the past, two galleries
were located
on the right-hand side that
joined
together and relocated on
left
-hand-side of the map. The
old
buildings
were constructed
as a concert hall. A huge
building
in the center of the map was
used
for the concert hall and cinema that
today
is demolished
.
central
exhibition
area
and a
new
building
for cinema
are built
on that location. Toilet
building
on the
left
side was
moved
to the opposite side, below the
new
concert hall and become smaller.

A café
is built
between the
new
gallery and outdoor exhibition
area
. There was a snack bar in the north-west that completely
destroyed
and meeting room below it
was separated
into two
building
that replaced with snack bar. A
new
building
is created
between
today
cinema and meeting rooms that
use
as drama studio.

wasteland
in the bottom of the map became an outdoor exhibition
area
and performance
area
.
A lot of
trees
are planted
and several bench tables
add
to it.
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