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Describe a project you had to do in your studies or jobYou should say:• hat type of project it was• what the main aim of the project was• who helped you with itand say what you learned from this project

Describe a project you had to do in your studies or jobYou should say: • hat type of project it was• what the main aim of the project was• who helped you with itand say what you learned from this project Kng7k
I want to establish myself as an interior designer and accordingly got admitted at Martin School of Design in Brisbane, Australia. I recently have completed a designing project related to my course completion This project was about designing the interior of an office building and I was assigned as the chief designer of the entire project. Though it was a demonstration, I had to complete the project successfully to get my desired degree. The School authority assigned me a moderate space of a large building to decorate for a multinational corporation and I had to complete the project within three days. I had to measure the space, check the wall colour, furniture size and number, the budget for the decoration and many other things together. At first, I drew a sketch and separated that into several sections. Then I drew the furniture placed on different spaces to have an idea how they will look like when they are really placed in the office. Then I had to think about the colour pattern and its similarity with the furniture. The School authority told me to use suitable colours with the furniture and I picked so. Finally, when the project was done, I was surprised with the result! The design brought and A+ for me in the course I had studied the course for over one year and learnt everything related to the interior decoration. The course instructors cordially trained me with the issues related to interior decoration like the use of stylish elements, colour combination, how to make spaces in small rooms, lighting at the rooms and many other relevant things. So, the project solely aimed to test my skills and expertise over the things that I have learnt. The authority wanted to check my real life ability in interior decoration and how I deal with troublesome situations. In fact, the project was seriously a trouble with the issues of colour and furniture size. The majority of the furniture was of medium size and I had to place them in different small chambers and also had to match the room colour with the furniture. I had to use different light and deep shades to meet the purpose and some of the shades were tougher to find out. Besides, it was the final test for me to pass the diploma course and based on this practical project, my scores were to be set. However, the project was a grand success for me and I achieved the highest grade point against the project Since it was my last project and the responsibilities were huge, the School authority engaged some of the junior students with me to support me and learn something practical that they have been reading in the books. I was associated with four junior students of my department who were of great help to me to complete the project smoothly. They followed all of my orders and turned useful most during the furniture replacement. Being a female, it was difficult indeed for me to shift medium-sized weighty furniture like wooden tables, wooden chairs and other stuff. They helped me to the largest extent in this case and I am grateful to them for their unconditional contribution. But I have also shared my knowledge and understanding over the entire course with them as well to make their senses developed like mine. As a result, we formed a team and worked excellently until the project finished. The project was truly helpful for them and as their first experience, they had done very well To be frank, I learnt lots of things from the project. Earlier, all my knowledge was based on the books and power point presentations. But when I was assigned to the project, I found that I had to apply all my earned knowledge. The knowledge was useful for many purposes and I effectively applied them. But I had some troubles regarding the colour selection in rooms. Each of the spaces was different from the other and thus the colour pattern was dissimilar too. Besides, the lighting system also was a bit difficult and concealing the lights under different shades and covers which were the two other most challenging tasks in the project. I also had to use some mirrors for special lighting effects and in that case, I had to invest my ready wit and common sense to adjust the issue. Finally, I completed the project with a deep sense of satisfaction and learnt to decorate the interior perfectly
I want to establish myself as an
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interior
designer and
accordingly
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got
admitted at Martin
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School
of Design in Brisbane, Australia. I recently have completed a designing
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project
related to my
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course
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completion


This
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project
was about designing the
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interior
of an office
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building and
I
was assigned
as the chief designer of the entire
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project
. Though it was a demonstration, I had to complete the
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project
successfully
to
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get
my desired degree. The
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School
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authority
assigned me a moderate
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space
of a large building to decorate for a multinational corporation and I had to complete the
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project
within three days. I had to measure the
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space
,
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check
the wall
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colour
,
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furniture
size and number, the budget for the
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decoration
and
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many
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other
things together. At
first
, I drew a sketch and separated that into several sections. Then I drew the
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furniture
placed on
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different
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spaces
to have an
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idea
how they will look like when they are
really
placed in the office. Then I had to
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think
about the
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colour
pattern and its similarity with the
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furniture
. The
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School
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authority
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told
me to
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use
suitable
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colours
with the
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furniture
and I picked
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so
.
Finally
, when the
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project
was done
, I
was surprised
with the result! The design brought and A+ for me in the course

I had studied the
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course
for over one year and
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learnt
everything related to the
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interior
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decoration
. The
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course
instructors
cordially
trained me with the issues related to
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interior
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decoration
like the
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use
of stylish elements,
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colour
combination, how to
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make
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spaces
in
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small
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rooms
, lighting at the
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rooms
and
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many
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other
relevant things.
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So
, the
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project
solely
aimed to
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test
my
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skills
and expertise over the things that I have
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learnt
. The
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authority
wanted to
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check
my real life ability in
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interior
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decoration
and how I deal with troublesome situations. In fact, the
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project
was
seriously
a trouble with the issues of
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colour
and
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furniture
size. The majority of the
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furniture
was of medium size and I had to place them in
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different
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small
chambers and
also
had to match the
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room
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colour
with the
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furniture
. I had to
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use
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different
light and deep shades to
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meet
the purpose and
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some of the
shades were tougher to find out.
Besides
, it was the final
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test
for me to pass the diploma
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course
and based on this practical
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project
, my scores were to
be set
.
However
, the
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project
was a grand success for me and I achieved the highest grade point against the project

Since it was my last
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project
and the responsibilities were huge, the
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School
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authority
engaged
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some of the
junior students with me to support me and learn something practical that they have been reading in the books. I
was associated
with four junior students of my department who were of great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to me to complete the
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project
smoothly
. They followed all of my orders and turned useful most during the
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furniture
replacement. Being a female, it was difficult
indeed
for me to shift medium-sized weighty
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furniture
like wooden tables, wooden chairs and
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other
stuff. They
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helped
me to the largest extent in this
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case and
I am grateful to them for their unconditional contribution.
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But
I have
also
shared my
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knowledge
and understanding over the entire
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course
with them
as well
to
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make
their senses developed like mine.
As a result
, we formed a team and worked
excellently
until the
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project
finished. The
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project
was
truly
helpful for them and as their
first
experience, they had done
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very
well

To be frank, I
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learnt
lots of things from the
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project
. Earlier, all my
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knowledge
was based
on the books and
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power point
presentations.
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But
when I
was assigned
to the
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project
, I found that I had to apply all my earned
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knowledge
. The
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knowledge
was useful for
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many
purposes and I
effectively
applied them.
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But
I had
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some
troubles regarding the
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colour
selection in
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rooms
. Each of the
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spaces
was
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different
from the
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other
and
thus
the
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colour
pattern was dissimilar too.
Besides
, the lighting system
also
was a bit difficult and concealing the lights under
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different
shades and covers which were the two
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other
most challenging tasks in the
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project
. I
also
had to
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use
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some
mirrors for special lighting effects and
in that case
, I had to invest my ready wit and common sense to adjust the issue.
Finally
, I completed the
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project
with a deep sense of satisfaction and
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learnt
to decorate the
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interior
perfectly
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IELTS academic Describe a project you had to do in your studies or jobYou should say: • hat type of project it was• what the main aim of the project was• who helped you with itand say what you learned from this project

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