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The maps below show changes in a local theatre in England in 2010 and 2012.

The maps below show changes in a local theatre in England in 2010 and 2012. dloA2
The maps illustrate the transformation of a local theatre in England between 2010 and 2012. In general, the most significant changes are about the layout of the theatre and some existing features have been converted. However, it also can be seen clearly that the central part of the theatre remained unchanged over the given period of time. To be more specific, in 2010, the theatre could be accessed from the main door in the South, and to the left are the admin office and ticket office. Throughout the following two years, these offices have been converted into a restaurant. Moreover, the coffee shop on the right has been changed and separated into two new sectors: ticket office and storage room. Regarding the remaining parts of the theatre, from 2010 to 2012, the auditorium and stage witnessed no changes. The last area of this local theatre experienced some remarkable changes when the dressing room has been divided into three new rooms, namely, shower room, dressing room, and coordination room. The final innovation took place in the storage room, after 2 years, it has been replaced by an admin office.
The maps illustrate the transformation of a local
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theatre
in England between 2010 and 2012.
In general
, the most significant
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changes
are about the layout of the
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theatre
and
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some
existing features have
been converted
.
However
, it
also
can be
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seen
clearly
that the central part of the
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theatre
remained unchanged over the
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given
period of time.

To be more specific, in 2010, the
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theatre
could
be accessed
from the main door in the South, and to the
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left
are the admin
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office
and ticket
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office
. Throughout the following two years, these
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offices
have
been converted
into a restaurant.
Moreover
, the coffee shop on the right has been
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changed
and separated into two new sectors: ticket
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office
and storage room.

Regarding the remaining parts of the
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theatre
, from 2010 to 2012, the auditorium and stage witnessed no
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changes
. The last area of this local
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theatre
experienced
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some
remarkable
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changes
when the dressing
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room
has
been divided
into three new
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rooms
,
namely
, shower
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room
, dressing
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room
, and coordination
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room
. The final innovation took place in the storage
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room
, after 2 years, it has
been replaced
by an admin
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office
.
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IELTS academic The maps below show changes in a local theatre in England in 2010 and 2012.

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