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The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. wOBrm
The bar chart illustrates how different income groups are distributed in Cities and Regional centres of Australia. It is reported as a percentage of population. Overall, it is evident that those earning a higher average yearly wage are more in the Cities, although the majority of both, Cities and Regional centres, are inhabited by the Middle and Lower Middle income groups. The low income group, that is those earning $40, 000 or lesser are seen residing more preferentially in Regional Centres at around 22% as compared to 13% in the cities. The Middle and the Lower Middle, earning upto $70, 000 and $120, 000 respectively, were seen predominantly in both areas, however those in the Middle Income range were seen highest in the Cities at 35%. Following next, at 34% is the Lower Middle class seen maximum in the Regional centres. Finally, the High Income sector is one of the minorities in both areas, ranging from 15% to 20% between the two, Cities and Regional Centres respectively.
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