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he flow chart illustrates the steps necessary to obtain a driving license in the US.

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The flow chart illustrates the steps necessary to obtain a driving license in the US. First, it is necessary to go to the driving license center and fill in the forms. Then, an eyesight test is given, and no license can be given to those who fail this test. However, those who pass the eyesight test must then pay the fees and take a written exam. Concurrently, the result of the written exam determines the next steps. Those who fail this test may then retake it, and if they pass, they are then able to take the road exam. Some people may fail the written exam and they are allowed to try it for the third time, and once more, if they pass they can take the road exam. Otherwise, if they fail the written exam again, they must pay the fees before being allowed to retake the written exam once more. Eventually, in contrast, those who pass the written exam first time and then take the road exam immediately. Alternatively, all who pass the road exam will get the driving license. Those who fail must pay fees again and retake both the written and road exams.
The flow chart illustrates the steps necessary to obtain a driving
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license
in the US.

First
, it is necessary to go to the driving
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license
center and fill in the forms. Then, an eyesight
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test
is
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given
, and no
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license
can be
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given
to those
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who
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fail
this
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test
.
However
, those
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who
pass the eyesight
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test
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must
then pay the fees and take a
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written
exam.

Concurrently
, the result of the
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written
exam determines the
next
steps. Those
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who
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fail
this
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test
may then retake it, and if they pass, they are then able to take the
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road
exam.
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Some
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people
may
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fail
the
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written
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
exam and
they are
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allowed
to try it for the third time, and once more, if they pass they can take the
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road
exam.
Otherwise
, if they
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fail
the
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written
exam again, they
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must
pay the fees
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before
being
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allowed
to retake the
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written
exam once more.
Eventually
,
in contrast
, those
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who
pass the
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written
exam
first
time and then take the
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road
exam immediately.

Alternatively
, all
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who
pass the
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road
exam will
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get
the driving
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license
. Those
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who
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fail
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must
pay fees again and retake both the
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written
and
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road
exams.
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IELTS academic he flow chart illustrates the steps necessary to obtain a driving license in the US.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
197 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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