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map science park 2008 present

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The two maps illustrate the changes made in the science park in two different time periods (2008 and at present). Overall, there are few noticeable changes in the present plan. Some of them have expanded over the years. The grassland in the north-west is totally replaced by research and development. Additionally, the reception and IT centre are converted into university hub and Innovation centre respectively. Furthermore, cyber security block and car park have expanded by compromising on the grassland. In addition to this, station and bus stop are newly constructed at the south and east of the present science park. A new path is established between the car park and the station. Also, a junction of path is formed between innovation centre, car park, cyber security, station. The two roads connected to car park are renovated to cycle paths. However, it can be seen that the trees were not cut down till today.
The two maps illustrate the
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changes
made in the science
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park
in two
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different
time periods (2008 and at present).

Overall
, there are few noticeable
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changes
in the present plan.
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Some
of them have expanded over the years.

The grassland in the north-west is
totally
replaced by research and development.
Additionally
, the reception and IT
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centre
are converted
into university hub and Innovation
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centre
respectively
.
Furthermore
, cyber security block and
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car
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park
have expanded by compromising on the grassland.
In addition
to this, station and bus
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stop
are
newly
constructed at the south and east of the present science park.

A new path
is established
between the
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car
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park
and the station.
Also
, a junction of path
is formed
between innovation
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centre
,
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car
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park
, cyber security, station. The two roads connected to
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car
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park
are renovated
to cycle paths.
However
, it can be
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seen
that the trees were not
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cut
down till
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today
.
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IELTS academic map science park 2008 present

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  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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