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Graph teachers 2001 to 2007

Graph teachers 2001 to 2007 0EAXl

the line graph describes percentage of new accepted language teachers that Ontario's schools hired during 7 year period. / although both English and french language teacher's line started nearly the same percentage in 2001, their differences were rose by 40% in 2007. the reason is that the numbers for french was stable, while the trend was downward for the other group overall. / the data for English language teachers started 70% and decreased sharply to near 40%. in the next two years, there was a slight increase which wasn't enough to reach to the point that was in 2002. afterwards again, numbers were fall considerably from 2005 to 2007 to below 30%. / the amount for french language teachers were started just under other group and decreased significantly and stayed under the other groups to 55%. but over the next year, it went up and reach to its first number. between 2003 and 2007 the line was level off and remained close to 70%.

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