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The maps below show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and the changes in 2010

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the two given pictures provided a comparison of a museum layout, between 1990 and 2010. By taking a first glance of the maps, the most noticeable change of the layout is the replacement of the cottage area with a cafe. The area of the cafe is also made smaller, when compared to the cottage area in 1990. There are several expansions of the facilities. The store, as well as the shop, are both extended to approximately one thirds extra of the original space. As a result of the shop expansion, the exhibition area is reduced in 2010. In addition, the garden area is also removed in 2010, in order to make way for a new car park. This is located underneath a bigger carpark. some smaller changes to the layout involves an addition of several trees in the garden, and a change of the exit's orientation. Finally, the bigger carpark and the path stayed unchanged.

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