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The bar chart depicts the number of residents in America who did not have a job due to their degree and the table illustrates the connection between personal professional degree and average salary per week in 2005.

The bar chart depicts the number of residents in America who did not have a job due to their degree and the table illustrates the connection between personal professional degree and average salary per week in 2005. In general, the person who had higher degree would have bigger chance to receive a work. Regarding the bar chart, 8% of US citizens who had less than a highschool diploma stands at the highest position, followd by 5. 6% of only had high school diploma people. Meanwhile, residents who had professional and doctoral degrees had the lowest unemployment percentage, around 1. 5%. As can be seen from the table, the people who had the highest number of weekly salary, $1800, had professional degree. The second position belonged to doctors with 1740 dollars in a week, followed by Americans who had master's and bachelor's degree with 1560 and 1246 dollars. At the same time, people with less than high school level reiceived the lowest amount of money in a week, $538 and their salary is just a third of the money that a doctor had.

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