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The pie chart indicates the proportion in the term of the mature people’s weight of the health side in one nation in 2015, meanwhile the bar chart informs the overweight or obese adults range between 1965 and 2015. Generally, we can see that the obesity grew up gradually through these years, which means that the most adults had the high weight and the obese grown-ups had caught on. In the bar graph, from 1965 to 1985 the rate of overweight or too fat adults remained stable at just over 45 percent and it started with the lowest ratio in 1965. After ten years, there had been a strong rise, it was up to nearly three-fifths and the number of these human being grew steadily and caught the peak at approximately three quarters in 2015. About the pie chart, the group of bulky grown- ups got the highest rate which was over one- third. In 2015, the quantity of the overheavy and the vigorous adults was slightly similar in size, obviously, the difference was quite small. Opposite these three groups the group of severely obses the strongly obese adults was, they gained the tiny proportion which reached the smallest portion in this pictorial
The pie chart indicates the proportion in the term of the mature
people
’s weight of the health side in one nation in 2015, meanwhile the bar chart informs the overweight or obese
adults
range between 1965 and 2015.

Generally
, we can
see
that the obesity grew up
gradually
through these years, which means that the most
adults
had the high weight and the obese grown-ups had caught on.

In the bar graph, from 1965 to 1985 the rate of overweight or too
fat
adults
remained stable at
just
over 45 percent and it
started
with the lowest ratio in 1965. After ten years, there had been a strong rise, it was up to
nearly
three-fifths and the number of these human being grew
steadily
and caught the peak at approximately three quarters in 2015.

About the pie chart, the group of bulky grown- ups
got
the highest rate which was over one- third. In 2015, the quantity of the
overheavy
and the vigorous
adults
was
slightly
similar in size,
obviously
, the difference was quite
small
. Opposite
these three groups
the group of
severely
obses
the
strongly
obese
adults
was, they gained the tiny proportion which reached the smallest portion in this
pictorial
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6.0
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