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The pie chart indicates the proportion in the term of the mature people’s weight of the health side in one nation in 2015, meanwhile the bar chart informs the overweight or obese adults range between 1965 and 2015. Generally, we can see that the obesity grew up gradually through these years, which means that the most adults had the high weight and the obese grown-ups had caught on. In the bar graph, from 1965 to 1985 the rate of overweight or too fat adults remained stable at just over 45 percent and it started with the lowest ratio in 1965. After ten years, there had been a strong rise, it was up to nearly three-fifths and the number of these human being grew steadily and caught the peak at approximately three quarters in 2015. About the pie chart, the group of bulky grown- ups got the highest rate which was over one- third. In 2015, the quantity of the overheavy and the vigorous adults was slightly similar in size, obviously, the difference was quite small. Opposite these three groups the group of severely obses the strongly obese adults was, they gained the tiny proportion which reached the smallest portion in this pictorial

The pie chart indicates the proportion in the term of the mature This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s weight of the health side in one nation in 2015, meanwhile the bar chart informs the overweight or obese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 range between 1965 and 2015.

Generally
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the obesity grew up gradually
 through these years, which means that the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 had the high weight and the obese grown-ups had caught on.

In the bar graph, from 1965 to 1985 the rate of overweight or too This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 remained stable at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 45 percent and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with the lowest ratio in 1965. After ten years, there had been a strong rise, it was up to nearly
 three-fifths and the number of these human being grew steadily
 and caught the peak at approximately three quarters in 2015.

About the pie chart, the group of bulky grown- ups This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 the highest rate which was over one- third. In 2015, the quantity of the Possible spelling mistake found.over heavy
overheavy
 and the vigorous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 was slightly
 similar in size, obviously
, the difference was quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
. Opposite The verb 'groups' is singular. Did you mean: "these three group"?these three group
these three groups
 the group of severely
Possible spelling mistake found.oboesoasesobsessBBSesOSesobs es
obses
 the strongly
 obese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 was, they gained the tiny proportion which reached the smallest portion in this Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpictorial.pictorial!pictorial?pictorial:pictorial,pictorial;
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