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The map shows the change of museum from 1957 to 2007.

The map shows the change of museum from 1957 to 2007. 8xwnx

Provided the static maps beneath highligt data about inside and outside of the museum in the years 1957 and 2007. All in all, there has been big changes. The museum's building has been enlarged, as a result of chopping down the trees. And there added a new car park. In the first stage, the trees in the north of the museum's area cut, and then education centre and special exhibition rooms have been erected. The trees in the west corner of the map cut and also fir trees near to the road chopped down, after that alternatively new museum shop were constructed. Next, big changes were inside of the museum building, instead of enterance hall, there built reception room, also museum store room destroyed, in lieu of new cafe had been built. In the following stage, local history room replaced, and then it located in the middle of the bulding. A major development is that footpath in the south of the museum interance was demolished, and small woodland in the left of the privious footpath turned into car park.

Provided the static maps beneath Possible spelling mistake found.highlight
highligt
 data about inside and This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".outside
outside of
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 in the years 1957 and 2007.

All in all, there has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. The museum's building has been enlarged
, as a result
 of chopping down the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
. And there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 a new car park.

In the first
 stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 in the north of the museum's area This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
, and then education Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and special exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 have been erected
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 in the west corner of the map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 and also
 fir You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 near to the road chopped down, after that alternatively
 new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 shop were constructed
.

Next
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 were This phrase is redundant. Consider using "inside".inside
inside of
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 building, instead
 of Possible spelling mistake found.entrance
enterance
 hall, there built reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 store You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
, in lieu of new 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 had been built
.

In the following stage, local history You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 replaced, and then it located in the middle of the Possible spelling mistake found.buildingbuddingbaldingbulgingbulkingbulling
bulding
. A major development is that footpath in the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
Possible spelling mistake found.entranceinsuranceinterfaceinteractinferenceintolerance
interance
was demolished
, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 woodland in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the Possible spelling mistake found.previous
privious
 footpath turned into car park. 