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The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps compare a bookstore in two different years and depict the infrastructure of the shop. Overall, number of changes can be observed over the years. Firstly, Fiction area which was huge in 2000 in North direction and North East as well, has now been changed to various small sections such as Art, Hobbies, Cookery, which were earlier found in the middle of the bookstore and lastly Fiction. In North East, Non-Fiction books can be found now, as compared to 2000 when it was in South Direction. Few new additions can be noticed, namely, the three tables placed in the middle of the store and Cafe in South direction at the same place as of the Non-Fiction in the year 2000. Although, various changes have been observed in the span of two decades yet Entrance, Travel, New books, and Servuce desk did not change the location in and size in any way. Moreover, all these are part of the west part of the shop.
The maps compare a bookstore in two
different
years and depict the infrastructure of the shop.
Overall
, number of
changes
can
be observed
over the years.

Firstly
, Fiction area which was huge in 2000 in North direction and North East
as well
, has
now
been
changed
to various
small
sections such as Art, Hobbies, Cookery, which were earlier found in the middle of the bookstore and
lastly
Fiction. In North East, Non-Fiction books can
be found
now
, as compared to 2000 when it was in South Direction. Few new additions can
be noticed
,
namely
, the three tables placed in the middle of the store and
Cafe
in South direction at the same place as of the Non-Fiction in the year 2000.

Although, various
changes
have
been observed
in the span of two decades
yet
Entrance, Travel, New books, and
Servuce
desk did not
change
the location in and size in any way.
Moreover
, all these are part of the west part of the shop.
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IELTS academic The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
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